My Debut Novel - "Beneath the Cloudline"

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Beneath the Cloudline: United we climb. Divided we fall.

After years of fragmented writing sessions, late nights, and lots of coffee, I finally finished my first novel. It's called Beneath the Cloudline.

Where It Started

Years ago, I had a dream about people climbing ropes and swinging between futuristic towers like acrobats. They maintained the buildings, but they were never allowed inside.

That image stuck with me.

I turned it into a bedtime story for my kids: two worlds stacked on top of each other, looking at each other through glass. One above the clouds. One below them. Both depended on the other, even if they had forgotten how connected they really were.

I didn't know then what the vision would become. I just knew my kids liked the story. So I started to expand my ideas, writing them down.

What It Is

Beneath the Cloudline is a young adult sci-fi fable about broken systems and found family.

Visit my wiki-style pages for more information:

• Story
• Characters
• World
• The Great Weathering
• City of Halidom
• Systems of Halidom
• The Science
• Themes
• Read an Excerpt
• Similar Books
• Inspiration
• Series

What It Took

This has been more than writing a book.

It's been learning to trust an idea long enough to finish it. "Someday" only becomes real when you keep plugging along, even on mornings when a single sentence takes an hour to write.

If you've ever asked me, "Hey Patrick, where's the book?" thanks. That question became fuel. It reminded me that someone was waiting, and that the "cloudline" mattered beyond my own head.

What's Next

More details are coming soon, including the official release date and where you can purchase it.

I look forward to sharing it with you. Stay tuned. The climb is just beginning. - PL